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watercolor. This is part of a series about the death of a childhood friend of mine.
model-Angela Choo

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:iconinufan225:
My only problem with this renewed one is the shot itself; it seems a bit crooked and leans towards the right a bit, and the other was a bit more straight.

In terms of the water coloring, you are the main judge of your work. If you find it to be even better and conveys that certain emotion in ways the latter couldn't, then this definitely is the better piece.

The tones do seem to have more depth to them. I like them both and i enjoy all of your pieces, so they're great to me.
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:iconemey:
agreed with ~inufan225, this one is also great looking, and I believe that only the Artist who created an image can explain better about it. But the previous one in lighter tones, was portraying the feeling of Embarrassment, so i will go with that, but it is only me.....:-)

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:icondemirmurat:
nothing to say. GREAT!
:iconstevecavallo:
thanks, i guess i should re-shoot the art... i noticed it was crooked after i posted it . the first version did look flat and my daughters both thought it needed more color.... i agree. especially seeing the original..the first version was missing something. thanks for your comments.
steve

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:iconastroluc:
Well I think they both work in their own way... I prefer this one due to the increased contrast but I think the other suits the mood of the piece better; Hell, you're the artist and it's really all up to you in the end.

Lovely work.

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:iconstevecavallo:
with this one i missed..... the idea i had in the first sketch did not come out in either finish... i like the piece anyway, but it wasn't what i had in mind.
thanks for the comments.\steve

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:iconkat-su-chan:
I love the composition of this piece, the bright red is awesome as it brings the attention right to the girl.

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:icontpol:
the light is just perfect!

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August 31, 2007
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Aug 30, 2007, 10:59:52 AM

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